Personal Photography Zines// Feedback & New Zine Ideas

I went to a friend to get some feedback about the zines as I have decided to reprint them. The language and text is not suitable for a zine. It should be cut down massively. Simply just have a tiny bit about the book and my name. Nothing about what I do as a photographer.

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Feedback.

The feedback has been good and I want to go ahead with what I have been told.

• The first thing is to change the text and take out the 'about' section. All I will have is a tiny bit of information about what will be in the zine. 
• The outer cover will not have my name on it. All it will have is the title about the zine, for example 'barcelona' or 'italy'.

Apart from these two points that is all that will change is the zines. Very simple but I will have to spend an awful amount of time redoing them! I will have to go to drop in to which is a very long process.

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Vinyl.

Above will be the new vinyl for the front cover, its clean, simple, and will look great when finished. I took away 'photography' because its sounds to official which I don't like too much. 

Other zines I have looked at don't have photography in the title. I think its pretty obvious once opening the book what the content will be!

I've taken out all of the text and it will instead be the same as the front cover. I feel much more comfortable with this decision and I look forward to what it will look like!

NEW

NO Name

I have decied that i will not have my name at all on the front cover, just the name of the book and the number out of the zines. The inside will instead have my name, along with the name of the zine and the zine number out of four.