CRITS// The Outsiders, Innocent & Elmwood

We had our crits in a group of ten or so. I decided to bring in 3 of my briefs that were near completion.

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Elmwood

Make other products.

• Bucket.
• Invoice. 
• Web.
• Absence Card.
• Leaflet.

Colours? Make them more blue. 

Innocent Drinks

• Maybe consider making promotional material?
• Photograph final photographs and upload to blog. 
• Make presentation Boards 

The Outsiders

• Is the cover appropriate for a children and adult audience- Considering the book isn't actually that suitable for children, we think so!
• Change background colour, make it more light possibly?
• Other Products- Bookmarks, Posters, DVD Case, Ebook. 
• Make type smaller on back.