Crit// Innocent Drinks and The Dead Stray

The Dead Stray My Questions:

• Do you think the overall design reflects the blues rock genre?
• Do my blog posts display a detailed journey of the process of my designs?
• Is there anything you would change or anything you would recommend? 

Feedback:

• The design is much better with stickers.
• Don't like the script type on your leaflets if im honest, reckon a sans serif would look better
• Love the purple vinyl and sticker.
• Laminate material is fantastic, really tactical.
• Sticker has printed pretty fuzzy.
• Great product shots!
• The overall design works for a blues rock genre. The strong bold colours work well with the image.
• Your blog posts are very detailed and we can see how your work has progressed. 
• The only thing I can suggest os that the label the dead stray is slightly pixelated.
• Maybe try printing on clear vinyl? Could look more polished. might stand out less though.
• The overall design fits the music gene especially the colours
• Well done on your blog posts! lots of visual and discussion about your progress. 
• Maybe at the end. Do a mini self evaluation.
• I recommend making a bigger product range for the dead stray, bill boards etc.

Innocent Drinks My Questions:

• Are my designs easy to understand?
• Innocent drink run on a playful and fun back of pack, does this come across in my work? 
• Is there anything you would change or anything you would recommend? 

Feedback

• Yes, your designs are easy to understand, but be careful to have not that much information in your designs, theres lots of text.
• The designs are fun and playful. But need more of that element still! 
• I've just realised it's very educational, which is beneficial!
• Your designs are clear and suit the style of the brand
• Strawberry and banana facts are interesting to do with the brand.
• Links with the idea of health.
• Vitamins artwork is good. 
• Try and use less copy if you can.
• Have copy bolder and the designs that work better have more imagery than text. Good Work!
• Yeah designs are very easy to understand.
• Looks like its aimed at children? 
• Playful, fun aesthetic. Could you use copy in a more playful way though?