Innocent Drinks// Crit

Crit with: Martin, Luke, Tanida, Lisa, Lizzie 

I have managed to find some people around the studio to crit my work and see what they think. I want to know what looks good and what doesn't. What need doing and I would like some help getting an idea for my 5th and final design.

Tanida: Longanoid
Lisa: Vipen Website Scouts
Lisa and Lizzie: High Spirits Branding
Lizzie: The Outsiders Penguin book cover
Martin and Luke: The Uberging Paper



Feedback:

• Make the hat on the 3rd design an illustration. 
• Make the designs as a whole more consistent- Make all titles red.
• Example 2 and 3 are quite similar but one has a graph and the other doesn't. Make them the same? Will make the designs as a whole more consistent. 

This feedback is overall good and make sense and are points that if weren't brought up I would have not of recognised.